this is our first draft of our film. i was unable to be here for when we got feedbAck from a young audience, however my team completed this and told me what they said was good and what was bad.

Notably good points:

• Camera Shots
• Audience liked the extended takes
• Lighting

Notably Bad Points:

• Shaky camera for some shots

Potential Improvements:

• Some shots are unnecessarily long (may change opinion when voiceover is added)
• Some shots could cut straight to the action (door bang for example)

One thing that i have noticed is that on the credits i have been put down for lighting and will has been put down for cameraman which is the wrong way round. this has now been changed.