diary entry - noir film

as you can see from this image, me and michael kept adding information that would create more of an effective story. if has given us reasons for the actions and the voice over which will describe the pain he is in and the confussion. it sets out the past of a man being a reporter and how he has become nothing. this is just the one story we have come up with and is our final piece. it adds in three characters which will be talked about in the voice over however only one character will be visually scene.