From this you can see that most of our ideas had a huge twist within the task. we thought of this as it would cause shock to the audience and would involve the viewers to think about were we are heading giving hints away. this would lead to emotion so that the story wouldn't be forgotten and would have a meaning.

As you our main idea which we have expanded is about a boy who acts nerves all the time. He then enters a room were he is interrupted by a girl sitting at the back of the class room. he has a conversation with her about how he feels about what he did giving nothing away until the end. flash backs occur of how he killed a masked person at a party which reveals to be the girl he is talking to in the room.